[FEEDBACK] Tell me your experience (3 Pages)
These are two pages I ripped from something I’m working on. All I’d like is for you to read it and keep track of what you think and feel while picturing the scene in your head. When you’re done, I’d like you to tell me three things.
1. To you, what was the tone of the scene?
2. What is your understanding of the relationship between Mayana and Ray?
3. What main questions were you asking…